Now, an exercise in form: triolet

My thoughts are racing here and there;
I could not focus anyway.
At times it seems I cannot bear –
My thoughts are (racing here and there)
Disjointed – being caught in snare.
Staunch will my mind will not obey;
My thoughts are racing here and there-
I could not focus anyway.

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2 responses

  1. I like the switch to parentheses for the second repeat. Awesome!

    1. Gratitude! I had to switch it up a bit, otherwise it was to redundant for my tastes. So i used punctuation to break up the rhythm and change the meaning slightly. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading, and taking the time to comment! Very much appreciated! 🙂

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